Hi bloggers!In the past few weeks we did a pick a path,what is a pick a path well it's about when you have to make up a story that has a problem here is my story for an example my story is on a girl called Ella,she go's to the forest three times a week for her grandmas medicine.But there is something blocking the gate to the forest what will it be and what will be the solution.
Blog you later-Skye😀
Hi there Skye,
ReplyDeleteRecently I have just blogged on Shiya's blog about the same thing. But this time it's different she chose, the Jungle Book. Your one is about the forest, something similar about the both is that the Jungle Book is based in a forest/jungle. Your post looks like it relates to Little Red Riding Hood, with the wolf being the gate, and the solution is how can she prevent the wolf from beating her to grandma's house? I loved the way you inserted pictures in every slide, it makes your work more interesting. Keep it up!
Something you could work on next time is inserting some more description, and add in some detail about your work, then your work will be 'Ka Pai'! If you have time you could comment on my blog, tpsgarys.blogspot.com
Other then that keep up the great work.
Gary
Thanks for the feedback Gary, I will put more in description into my writing. I really appreciate your comment that you gave me Gary. I hope I will get better at writing more then I am now.
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